Why did I choose my major? (Version Three)

My major is Information Management(IM). And traced the reason why I chose IM is my father's suggestion. He told me that computer is indispensable in the future.
When I graduated from junior high school, I enrolled in National Taipei College of Business(NTCB). At that time, I was too young to plan for my future. I felt bewildered that I have no idea to choose my major, so I asked my father for help. My father gave me some suggestions about how to choose the major. He analyzed the college department to me from every aspect. He told me that the prospect of IM is brightening. It's necessary for everyone to learn how to use the computer. It may be a common sense for future. He asked me to accumulate the skill of using computer that I can keep up with the tendency. I believe that computer will replace people to do anything like robot in the future. Besides, I surf the Internet to prove my father's statements. I found using the computer is basic condition for work. It's very realistic problem for existence. So I thought if I choose IM as major, I will have more chances to job-hunt.
Certainly, I faced the same problem again when I graduated from NTCB. During the past five years, I found out that Information technology will be a plus for me. Different from the past time, I have clear plan and I decide to continue learning IM. Except the reasons that I told before, I developed an interest in IM and I could handle the work in IM well. So I choose IM when I enrolled in NTUST.
Presently, I have been studying in IM for seven years. I am never regretful for choosing IM as my major and I deeply appreciated my father's advice. In my graduate school, I will do research two more years in IM. I hope that I will be excellent in my area.

Why did you choose your major? --(version two)

My major is Information Management(IM). And traced the reason why I chose IM is that computer is indispensable in the future and my father's suggestion.
When I graduated from junior high school, I enrolled in National Taipei College of Business(NTCB). At that time, I was too young to plan for my future. I felt bewildered that I have no idea to choose my major, so I asked my father for help. My father gave me some suggestions about how to choose the major. He analyzed the college department to me from every aspect. He told me that the prospect of IM is brightening. It's necessary for everyone to learn how to use the computer. It may be a common sense for future. He asked me to accumulate the skill of using computer that I can keep up with the tendency. I believe that computer will replace people to do anything like robot in the future. Besides, I surfed the Internet. I found using the computer is basic condition for work. It's very realistic problem for existence. So I thought if I choose IM as major, I will have more chances to job-hunt.
Of course, I faced the same problem again when I graduated from NTCB. Different from the past time, I have clear plan and I decide to continue learning IM. Except the reasons that I told before, I developed an interest in IM and I could handle the work in IM well. So I choose Information Management when I enrolled in NTUST.
Presently, I have been studying in IM for seven years. In my graduate school, I will do research two more years in Information management. I hope that I will be excellent in my area.

Page 91--exercise!!

Topic sentence: all foreign students have the same difficulty--the English barrier.
A. The difficulty of English words.
1. An old word may no be using nowadays.
2. A lot of English words can combine to have different meanings.
a. The example of the word "work" and verb-and-preposition combination " to work out"
B. Another difficulty for foreigners is pronunciation.
1. Some words appear to be same, but different pronuncitaions have different meanings.
a. The word "conduct" has two different meanings depending on the pronunciation.
2. To understand an American also depend on his or hers accent.
a. There are different accents between northerers and southerners.
C. Some technical terms and phrases doesn't exist in their own country.
Conclusion:Many foreign students found that learning English is the hardest part of college life.

Why did you choose your major?

My major is Information Management(IM). And traced the reason why I choose IM is that computer is indispensable in the future and my father's suggestion.
When I graduated from junior high school, I enrolled in National Taipei College of Business(NTCB).At that time, I was too young to plan for my future. I felt bewildered that I have no idea to choose my major, so I ask my father for help. My father gave me some suggestions about how to choose the major.
He analyzed the college department to me from every aspect. He told me that the prospect of IM is brightening. It's necessary fro everyone to learn how to use the computer. It may be a common sense for future. He asked me to accumulate the skill of using computer that I can keep up with the tendency.
Besides, I surfed the Internet. I found using the computer is basic condition for work. It's very realistic problem for existence. So I thought if I choose IM as major, I will have more chances to job-hunt.
Of course I faced the same choice to choose my major when I graduated from NTCB. Different from the past time, I have clear plan and I decide to continue learning IM. Except the reasons that I told before, I developed an interest in the IM and I could handle the work of IM well. So I choose Information Management again.
Presently, I already study in IM for seven years. In my graduate school, I will do research two years more in Information management.

someone I admired.

I admire my father because he as talented as superman.
a. when I have any problem, he alaway give me advices and help me to solve it easily.
b. he can play quitar and play the paino by self-learning.
c. he can fix the stuff when it broke down.